Have you played Skyrim???
FF is okay, but a bit overrated. I would say Elden Ring is subjectively better in only some areas, but FF has dropped off a little over the years.
I'll take it you mean Final Fantasy VI????? If that's the case, well, I've never played any of those games. But an annoying kid at my school is obsessed with them and says that Elden Ring and Skyrim is crap and that Final Fantasy is the best.
I only have 15 minutes, so I wouldn't have time
@Grace do you have a long enough attention span to complete FF 6 in one siting? bc i do
"mhm😒" ur face....... (???? idk don't ask lol)
I actually have a decently long attention span; I just use it on things that are a better use of my time than scrolling and scrolling and scrolling just to read messages between other people.
yeah, I'm both. Reader and writer
My skills for advice are the hypothetical polar-opposite of Noah's. He is an experienced writer. I am an experienced reader.
but most of my experience comes from reading lots of different books, not writing them
(classic short attention span)
@Sammie yeah it is worth it
I do it to the point where I can't stand it anymore lol.
Same JJ. In some older groups it’s taken me a couple days, but it’s worth it
Oh yeah. Even if it's sorta a headache. I had to skim some of the super old ones, but it's good
I always read from the bottom of every chat in every group I join
Sillian, I always do that
If not that's fine. I don't care.
Are y'all interested in me continuing?
For clarity (if you want) you should probably read from the beginning of tthe chat
wow didn't even know about this group
How about we just don't be critical???
I don’t think he’s even a writer.
@Mario do you have any experience in writing?
Yeah bro, that’s my line!
Wow, Mario, that seems a bit harsh........
So basically a basic crime-lord killing off his subjects move
another detail I forgot to mention is that someone burned the Frost's house down. It didn't just happen. (Bryn's house). Her dad, Lord Atair (Lords and Ladies are titles for wealthy families in the Empire) worked in the government and (Bryn doesn't know this, she might figure it out later though...) was promoted to a job with more clearance. With this, he was told about the making of the virus. Atair frowned upon the project, so him, his wife, and his home was destroyed. Bryn would have died if she didn't escape.
I don't have much of a plot for book 2 yet...it's more of a shell. I know the basics, though. It was one that I added later on.
jkjk i know what you mean
I don’t have too much of an issue with the overall plot, just remember to use the S.L.E.D. method when writing individual paragraphs to make killer chapters. Also, don’t use too many cliffhangers or they will lose potency. Actually, don’t overuse any gimmick too much.
I will trust your final product.
He can’t just be this bad thing attached to the loosely hate-able name of Thoman, he needs to have a moment for the character to see he has somewhat reasonable motivations, but has carried out actions to get to his goals in truly twisted ways.
I have a backstory for him. I just didn't type it all out.
You can have peace, Noah, that my punctuation and CAPITALIZATION will be fine in the book. I was typing like crazy here and I don't really care.
First, Thoman needs a backstory. Some event that happened in his life that would give him reason to do such atrocities like this. All humans are made in the image of God and Thoman would need some reason that he is the character you’ve made him out to be.
(How much work your punctuation and cApItAlIzAtIoN need work.)
Wow. Words cannot describe.
THOBM2 for more information about SPO.
So yup. That's how book 1 ends. They all think they're fine but the virus is secretly being recreated behind their backs.
While he cultivated the virus, he started to recreate the antidote. But before Thoman could finish the antidote, he broke something and caught the virus, and died. Westley took over the operation.
Thoman had helped create the virus with Sangcarter in the first place before they were stopped, but he managed to escape from detainment. He used plastic surgery to change his face and cut his hair. He got married and had a son named Westley. (all this stuff is stuff that is figured out in like the background or book 2) ((mainly book 2)) When Westley grey old enough, Thoman taught him everything about the virus.
NOTE:
the virus was not completely destroyed. A Sangcarter scientist named Thoman Ross managed to salvage a small portion of it before it was destroyed. He went into hiding, and started to cultivate it again.
Taliyah moves to the Empire and eventually gets married to Alistair Moonstone (y'all when I introduced Taliyah, I said her name was Moonstone. She later becomes a Moonstone, but before she's a Crowl). He later becomes the new and great emperor of Erandum. Bryn moves to the empire, then to a small village near the border of Erandum later.
( in know, sorry guys) somehow they stop the virus in time, and destroy it. Most of the operations were happening in Sangcarter, so Erandum manages to shift most of the shame and hatred to them.
They're making an immunity that can make select people immune to their virus. The meeting doesn't reveal any dates though, or how close they are to finishing the virus or immunity. So the academy team doesn't know how long they have
They are able to hear what a bit of the meeting is about. Erandum and Sangcarter's government's are working together to create a virus that can be released into other countries to kill off the population and rulers, that way erandum and sangcarter can alone rule Medoran
They split up and a small portion of the group goes to one of Sangcarter's government buildings at the time of a rumored "important business meeting". The only way to get in and past security (little though it is) is through the ventilation. They quietly get into the vents and find the meeting room
(btw they're in Sangcarter)
something happens thats not really important, thennnnn:
Later they figure out what the Empire is planning. Erandum is making an alliance with Sangcarter, so the Academy wants some students/trainers to go to sangcarter for information as to why. Bryn and Taliyah and a bunch of others are chose to go on the mission
This puts Klover on edge, the second-in-charge had overseen the spies to the government
One time Taliyah is called into an important meeting, she's able to see some documents. Her improved memory can remember them better. During the meeting, they talk about how Principal Axlin works for the Empire
Because of their involvement in the Empire, they are moved to an apartment with the other spies which the Academy provides so as not to arouse suspicion within a home.
Wow! This blew up *proceeds to read with great interest*
The academy decides to evaluate the academy until the murders are solved. So the kids in the 1st and 2nd quarter are temporarily moved back to the orphanage while the 3rd and 4th quarter kids go to homes willing to take thme in.
Another death occurs which is yet to be thought of...
The next day at the Academy, during climbing training, the trainer's rope snaps and he falls, breaking his neck and back, dying almost immediatley. this rattles everyone. After, security finds that the rope was intentionally cut. (I'm not sure this is gonna stay...we'll see)
Taliyah responds telling them she'll think about it, not wanting to act suspicious.
(Here comes the fun part)
After a while in the operation, the government comes to trust Taliyah immensely. They then ask her to go to the Academy as a spy for them. They tell her she can't let anyone know, and she's stuck. (cause she's a spy for the Academy
They will be sent into the Empire with amazing backstorys as assistants to people so they can come close to information.
Bryn and Taliyah are both chosen
Soon, the academy suspects that the Empire is doing something wrong, so they intend to figure it out. When the time comes, they academy chooses some of the oldest and smartest orphans to sent into Erandum's government as spies to memorize some important documents that could help the academy figure out what the Empire is up to
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